Ryan read from both books and I was particularly taken with the chapbook, whose six short poems are titled after famous figures from the American Revolution but whose content is obliquely and tenuously determined by those titles, which serves to suggest new possibilities for what we might mean by an American revolution, even if only a turning in place. I like the incantatory qualities of the first poem, "Revere":
Bombardier, you laid the tracksShanna was next, and I've already had a bit to say about the pleasures of her work. She read a few poems from Down Spooky (including, I'm pleased to say, "Post-Texas Expressive Heat," quoted in full in my review) and then more recent work from a promising sequence called For Girls, inspired by a 19th-century manual of etiquette written by a Mrs. E.R. Shepherd which purports to tell young women how to be young ladies. Here's the poem that Aaron ably transformed into a broadside (really a trifold) for the occasion (I use asterisks to represent the breaks, but you should try to envision three columms, side by side):
For our hundreds of eyes
Spine for flowers, spit azalea
The lush lawn of the vacant girls' school
Tuesday is Sunday only
No one is dreaming
Bunker Hill, I-98, the harbor subs
Like the face of a watch.
I should like to wake you, minute by minute
Clatter through the restless green night.
Bombardier, with your lantern eyes
And lantern head
If
If if
And by sea.
You can carry, girls,I look forward to seeing these poems collected in a book, as I suspect they eventually will be. Thanks to both our readers, their significant others Kira and Shawn, and the folks who come out to hear a little poetry on a very rainy Saturday night.
a little distance
your influence
to the new side
your awakened study
of formation, requirements
*
First then, girls, you should
fasten onto your shoulders
a strap for purpose
for industrious earnest
pressure, for attending
to the demands of nature
Think of it
as a uniform
outside of which
you'd be too apart
*
All rooms have doors
& also windows
I haven't actually
heard that said, but
a draft might come
at right angles
toward the animal
part of you
the portion you've
bitten raw
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